War Tribes · Review copy · 23 August 2026
Everything the Healer track teaches, or is being asked to teach — twenty chapters of real, sourced survival medicine, gathered for Jaemie and Tori to tear apart before any of it gets built.
You don't have to be a medic to be useful here. Three things are worth flagging, and any of them alone is a good note: Is it true? (if you know better, say so) · Is it teachable? (would a player actually learn this, or just click past it) · Is it a good scene? (does it make you feel something, or is it a textbook page). Say which one you're answering and skip the rest.
And if something reads as cold, preachy, or like it's talking down to the player — say that loudest. That's the note that's hardest for Jesse to see from inside it.
Nothing more to do — Jesse already has all of it. Everything you typed went across as you wrote it. If you want a copy for yourself, or you'd rather email it to him directly, the buttons below will give you a file.
If anything in here made you go "wait, that can't be right" — that's the most valuable thing in the file. Don't soften it.
War Tribes design bible · Real-world basics, not a substitute for hands-on training · Every dose, concentration and regimen deliberately omitted